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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Pleim 5 83.33%
Scene 1 16.67%
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Old 01-25-05, 08:06 PM   #31
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Voted For: Pleim

Pleim:
You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne
You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains
Aight personal, decent opener overall
Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up
I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up
Another good personal
Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead
I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head
Lol it's funny cuz it's true.
You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck
Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck
Good closer, with another good personal

Scene:
No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb
couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb
Made no sense, weak opener overall
dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name
cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame
No punch
u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none
this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun
Decent setup, 2nd line didn't deliver
messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine
break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine
What the hell are you talking about?
bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion
Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion


Winner - Pleim, for better punches, and also had some good personals in there. Scene the only decent part of your verse was a setup, other than that your verse was garbage. You need to go back to elevating, hardcore-style. No hate though, Pleim just did better.

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