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Untraceable 4 44.44%
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt 5 55.56%
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Old 01-25-05, 10:04 PM   #14
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

flow,good vocab n feeling, i felt you protrayed this as a iterpretation of frustration(hatred), i liked it it was hard hitting in some areas, your closer was iffy but thebase of ya written was on point...good topical man...stay up...
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tracable.....i liked your content but vocab n overall ryhme scheme was way bad...srry but if its not gonna read like rap it aint a topical...it was hardeer to follow n had less thought put into it in my opinion...had some decent lines but couldve been written better...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
 


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