Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
this battle was kinda weak. not too good to me...
i think marv came out with tha win, cuase he came with more creativitie, and his structure was better. i think he had harder punches that landed in tha right areas, and his wordplay was also better. OVERALL, u had a good verse, i was feelin it for tha most part, but i still think u should elevate more, cause ur punches didnt land as hard as they shouldve
TBP-u had a nice verse, but i think most of ur barz were kinda played. not too much creativitie. and ur structure was fucked up, cause u had increadiblyyyy stretched lines. but u had some good shit. u tried to fit too much in one bar, and i think u should learn how to extend ur punches, without makin ur lines stretched. elevate on that. but overall, u had a nice verse, but i think u had too many mistakes to get my vote. NO HATE THO.
overall-i wasnt really feelin this battle. i seen better from both of yall...real talk. TBP, i was suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many stretched lines. marv, i was also suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many wack punches....but whatever. everybody can elevate, NO HATE...
PLZ RETURN THA FAVOR, CAUSE I TOOK THA TIME OUT TO VOTE ON YALL BATTLE. AND PLZ MAKE IT EXPLAINED, CAUSE I WAS HONEST WITH THIS ONE, AND I EXPLAINED IT THOUROUGHLY....
GOOD BATTLE. NO HATE...take all tha negative and positive feedback, and elevate....
~1~
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