Calamity - I thought your verse was decently good. Straight up. The vocals could use a little more volume. Lyrics are pretty ill. Mic presence is alright. Breath control is good. Flow is on target throughout the verse. Overall, you should re-record your verse, then it could be dope.

One Man Band - Quality isnt the best. Lyrics are decent.. not as good as Calam's but still alright. Mic presence is average. Breath control messes up at a few parts. Flow falls off at some points, for the most its pretty good though. Overall, a decent verse.. you should re-record as well, though.

In General - Beat is pretty sick. I think Calamity had the better verse. But overall, the track was still pretty good.

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