Voted For: Limited Edition

indeph- good:liked the way it related to the topic, liked the ending, okay voacabulary
bad: a few lines were strecthed, didnt like the rhyme scheme, couldve had better wordchoice for a lot of lines, a lot of words were repeated and didnte seem like it wwas for a particular meaning (like some pieces)

LE- good: nice for a short piece, liked the repetitiveness, felt like it was there for an actual reason, also related to the topic in a nice way, good ending
bad: couldve had a way better vocabulary, couldve stayed on topic a lil more, couldve expressed your thoughts a lil more detailed

both- good battle, gonna be close

overall-

vocab- indeph
ending- tie
worchoice-LE
styed on topic- indeph
flow/structure-LE

v/LE