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kesse 5 100.00%
A_M_H 0 0%
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Old 03-23-05, 06:07 PM   #30
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
From: East Coast
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Voted For: Kesse

thinks he's droppin hard, but really he exchanged feathers for his brain
i literally eat pigs like you, just re-arrange the letters of your name
GOOD PERSONAL, HAHAHA, GOT EM
like drunken down husbands on their wives, i'll attack this whore
crack ya core as i smack ya more, paintin up an 'L' as your blood splats the floor
NICE FLOW HERE, MULTIS
if you were to measure your rhymes, they wouldn't even tip the guage
cause when it comes to skill......your at the same level as your age
EHH, COULDVE BEEN BETTER
now i'd like to explain your sig to all of RV, so dont be hating
thugged out = whack....cause you man have no chance of elevating
PRETTY NICE CLOSER
OVERALL SIMPLE, TO THE POINT, NICE VERSE
NO NEED FOR THE EXPLANATION
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Bitch ur "Flows straight out the toilet" like "Overflowin shitters"
And my flow? its like a "Chargers QB" cuz son i "Fill-up Rivers" (Philip Rivers)
GOOD LINE,BUT PUNCH WAS MOSTLY SELF GLORIFY
Cant rap like spitter, Kesse like "Puttin dicks in whores" "Loose-in Often" (Losin often)
And Ill "Stun" u w/ "3 16"s, ull be out "Stone Cold" like "Steve Austin"
STRECHED, I SEE WAT YOU TRYING TO DO, NEEDS A LIL RE WORDING
So keep talkin, ill have ya whole team missin u, while their bumpin that old "Kels" (R kelly)
Like "I wish Kesse didnt battle AMH, and I wish he didnt put his career on the shelf"
DECENT, NOT BAD, NEEDS A LIL MORE
Put ya "Hands on my belt", cuz thats the "Closest ull ever come to my unit" (unit/team,dick)
And "My positive lines is mathematical" so of course "Non-Scientifics knew it" (his crew)
OK THIS WHOLE VERSE HAD THE POTENTIAL TO BE KILLER BUT SOME THINGS RUINED IT, 1. TOO STRETCHED AND STRUCTURE WAS CRAZY OFF, 2. NO NEED FOR EXPLAINATION WITH IN THE VERSE. 3. RE WORD IT AND YOU HOT.
FOR NOW I GOTTA VOTE KEESE
 
 


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