Voted For: DAZZLE

DAZZLE

Steppin up to me, yea you just breached this peace,
Ya lines r more played....than a "figure of speech!
^hehe, nice opener

Ima deliver your "RetroBution", this is my way to "pay back"
Your style is "Retro"..........so its "a thing of the past"!
^good good

150 RV dollars on hand,a large amount?Well i demand a recount,
How he gonna carry that shit, when he Dont own a bank account!
^cool bar

You got no love do you, so jus gimme this win, nobody likes you...
How do i know? Look at your Introduction thread....It only got one view!!
^hahaha, funny closer!

Nice verse right here, I feel you had good creativity in your punches, nice personals as well. Structure was just fine, am definitely feeling your flow and you found a good balance in your vocab. Don't really have anything bad to comment on, overall real good!


RetroBution

goin against ya peers..this battles gonna turn to tears
listening to obie trice..is the only time u heard "cheers"
^good good

ya names dazzle?..ya rhymes hardly set thing to shine
you couldnt "blow up" in this game..if u were a land mine.
^hehe funny

ya gon be dissapointed..youll never elevate to be a vet
you cudnt throw up sick lyrics..if u threw up the alphabet
^sowwy but this is mad played

ive seen your battles..and not one punch of note to hit..
verses like the wrong jigsaw piece..they simply a "misfit"
^nice nice

fuck it i dnt need a fith bar..your already in the slammer
i think ya spits r usefull,lol,right..as much as a glasshammer
^don't get it...

Okay, good verse as well! Had nice punches, some bit played but your personals were quite nice, didn't always stay as consistent as Dazzle though. Structure was cool, had your flow on lock and the vocabulary was just fine as well. Just try to get more creative and hardhitting personals, wordplay was nice though

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