Voted For: Ethnic

This is one of the worst battles I've ever seen.

Ethnic:
Punches are played, no personals, and no wordplay. You need to elevate fast. MJ lines are played DO NOT USE THEM. 50 Cent line was your best, and it really was bad. Work on your punches and personals.

Mad Knight:
Like I told Ethnic, DO NOT USE MJ LINES! Baghdad line was bad, as was your wording. Your punches were weak and played as well. Fake personals killed you. The pope line was bad considering you will probably get a lot of beef if people read it. Work on being original.

Overall, you get unlimited lines so you write under 15 lines together? Work on being original and using punches that aren't played and good personals.

v/Ethnic

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