Originally Posted by Creativitie

Voted For: Murdz

OK weak battled verse from j dot, Murdz your lines where strechted but decent

al in all there where no personals really int his battle so it was probably all prewritten, but who cares

j dot: you need to really gather up a few new words and biuld your vocab, your words where too simple and too obviouse, theres very little that hit, the game boy line was decnt but i seen that already on Rv so it looses a lil bit of points, there where alot of played concepts in your verse nothing really made me say"damn yo that was kinda ill" just take more time and dont under estamate yoru challenger

murdz: fiarly decent i like how you used a lot of multies you also had some good wordplay and metaphores that i havent heard in a while pretty good verse all in all, you had a few hotlines that made me say"WTF, pretty nice" you had some decent vocab and once again that rhyme scheme was nice...all in all you had some pretty nice shit, i dont really see how your loosing ,

jdot has alot more d/r, remeber i told you murdz D/R wins battles and this is a perfect exaple