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acuity 5 55.56%
warrior 4 44.44%
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Old 04-14-05, 12:01 PM   #16
MaRVJay
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Voted For: warrior

acuity:
You a warrior nigga like shaka Zulu, fighting sum1 more powerful than the sun
Like his dumbass, u runnin at me with a spear, im laughin in the cut wid ma gattling gun
^^^KIND OF A GOOD PERSONL HERE..BUT YA RYHME SCHEME WAS WACK
You get no responses afta requesting a sig, why shud GFX heads bother
Cos they know, battling me..uve dug ur grave kid, and ull be deleted from RV's roster
^^^^LOL HOW CAN U MAKE A PERSONAL OUT OF HIM GETTIN NO RESPONSES 4 A SIG...WASN'T FEELIN IT
U and wackness have a chemical attraction,ur in love, i can see it in ur lyrical interactions
So I'll throw an axe at you face and head, so u got a slit to match the one between legs
^^^^DIS DIDN'T RYHME AT ALL FAM

warrior:
throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/
^^^^^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME BUT I AINT REALLY LIKE DA PUNCH

im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/
^^^^UUHH OKAY..
i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/
^^^FEELIN DA MULTIS IN DIS SHIT AND DA PUNCH WAS KIND OF HOTT...

V/warrior...and why cuzz acuity's ryhme scheme was like a noobie and i thought it was wack,last bar didn't ryhme and he forced a personal....warrior u didn't have any personals which u need in a battle but u won dis cuzz of multis and u had a good ryhme scheme need da step up ya punchlines tho
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^^he's scared.lol
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