Voted For: Golden shellz

aightm, good stuff from both

Golden:
nice verse, man....
hard hittin punchlines, the closer had me like ';'oooh''
i've never seen people use ''the system'' before
an the lfunk flex shit was good too
nice wordplay an creativity, ya killed it with your verse, real good stuff

Wicked:
aight verse too, had me like ''oooh'' with your openeer, but ya verse lacked consistancy throughout...i wasnt feelin the line: about ''teeth hurt''...asn a few lines was stretched too, try n get too the point quicker

no hate wicked...vote goes ta Shellz

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186647
^^^
heres the link

__________________