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Old 05-03-05, 09:03 PM   #1
Spoken Prophecy
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Boomerang of Pain..

IP:

Your touch is equal to heaven and hell colliding,
your kisses desired but decieving keep me surviving
for u to hold im striving however,
love for my soul i am depriving..
anxiety torchers my sanity your vanity
is overwhelmed by your beauty that attracts the man in me
...I sit here confused though mentally and emotionally abused
i still feel a tremendous love for u..
maybe i deserve to hurt..because everytimes i escape the pain
i come back to u ...to suffer again..again and again
i ask my self why me? i look at my deeds and try to see is it me?
where did i go wrong? my soul parts with the crypt,
as my heart skips to the same song...a broken record..
well in these times a scarred cd depicts me...
as soon as i sense the ending its back to the beginning..
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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