Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS Review-

AckRite

Blayy Dyin From Punches, Lift Arm...No Sign Of Ya Pulse Kid
Only Time RV Dont Sleep On Ya Posts...We Unda Hypnosis!

This is the worst opener I've seen from you...butits good lol

Audios? Last Time You 'Touched Tracs'...It Was On Ya Head
New To Text? But He 'Eat Pencils' Jus To 'Swallow Da Lead'!

Decent....

Blayy Dont Wanna See Round 2.....And Dis Battles My Proof
Im DEAD SERIOUS, Ur More 'Fit 4 A Loss" Than Funeral Suits!

Haha

I AM Hip-Hop....Got This Homo's Road to Victory GridLocked
Asthmatic Wordplay, Bringin Dis MOTORMOUTH to a Pit-Stop!

Pretty good

We Know I Own You In Text...You Vulnerable A Virgin Newbie
& I Got Blayy "Down 4 Tha COUNT"......Like Dracula Groupies!

One of the best closere I've seen...ever

Yungg Blay

Yeah... listen up "AckRite" betta get your "facks right"
Cuz I got a punch like Ali and this is just my first "fight"

Played...

I ain't even gon lie tho, I'm feelin ya sig and Cass is right
He's a hustla, but you're not so stop actin like ya shit is tight

Worded weird but decent

Compare us to airlines, im "fly" like first class im ridin "top flight"
Your shit about to crash homie, this bout to be your "burial site

Meh...

Aiight, enough with that one rhyme this off the head its about time
Somebody hit the site with a real battle, murderin cats consistently like "organized crime"

Nice

Oh shit, i've already written 8 lines? That means minus this one got one more to make this battle mine
Im fixin to put you to sleep right here kid like this your fuckin "nursery rhyme"

TERRIBLE structure...decent close

Overall: AckRite took tthis...Baly had a decent verse but little personals...AckRite didnt have too many but what he had was INSANE lol...nice battle by both..rtf on my sig pieces...

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