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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-16-05, 07:05 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP:
nice stucture decent flow pretty good imagery but i was thinking your rhyme scheme was a little off. work on that like intenral rhymes n shit. vocab could have been upped a little more but overall i rate it a C
rtf in my OM Morbid Thoughts its Parallel
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