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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-16-05, 08:08 PM
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The Paragraph President
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i like this piece long time no see yo cats ive been on rb so much after being banned but anyway good piece nice stucture good flow rhyme scheme was a little better for both of yall. vocabulary was pretty good as well and the imagery was pretty good on point.
rtf in my om Morbid Thoughts 1 its parallel
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