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Old 05-19-05, 01:32 PM   #11
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hmmmm damn both came o.k here, nothin special but its really hard to choose between the two

solo - o.k I like the first line clever and gud wordplay but I wasn't feelin the second line too much, i see where ur comin from but it was more of a diss at c.a.l.i than at spek, punch was there but not overly strong

spek - o.k first line was blah, just a set up, basically a filler line, but the second line was nice, original, neva heard nothin the same so its gud to me and it avoided have a played sound to it....gud

verdict - imma have to go with solo, cos his 1st & second lines were both o.k, whereas spek had a filler line and one hot line, so it was real close but imma give it solo....spek for future man try and add a bit of punch first line to and not just a set up, you cud argue it was a punch but it was real weak so im classin it as a setup, abit stronger in the first line and this wud have been yours....

peace....honest vote

return the fav on my battle with kesse if ya get chance, honest as always
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