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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-23-05, 01:22 AM
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The Paragraph President
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lmfao. whoa stucture is weak vocabulary is decent. screw the // that makes you seem herbish emotion needs work imageyr is off a little flow is decent could be better but ya rhyme scheme is horrible but keep practing and elevating. 1
rtf links in the sig.
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