Voted For: Lay-Text

this was a pretty dope topical from both but i was feelin lay-text's alittle more ,

Lay-Text
Your vocab and wordplay was on point , your structure was good some lines were alittle stretched though,nice emotions and good imagery was felt on your drop.. you really made the reader image what was happening , ... nice drop... nice topic ... and i like the repfrence to Pac...it was really deep..
Overall nice drop keep it up , and it was enough to take the win


Sakim
You had another good drop..just use lacked alittle, your structure was on point ...your wordplay and vocab was also on point , you just to me didnt have as much feelin in your drop..that lay-text had , i was really feelin the wedding reffrence then the marraige crashin...your flow was good i was really liking your drop..i just felt the pac reference alittle more...

overall vote-Lay text

__________________