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05-26-05, 06:49 PM
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this was unique. your lines were short which added dimension to your verse. your vocab wasn't big which would also make it sound better on audio. flow was solid... n/m bad to say, try putting this on audio. imagery was alright...nothing special...keep it up
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...797#post2177797
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