i don't know what anybody in here mean saying your flow was good.. it was not. your delivery is terrible but then again i can't see you trying to get gully on a soft beat with that voice you have. you clearly had personals that 'could have' been effective BUT you just made statements.

this = Not a battle verse if you can't throw at least one punch.

you should have left it in writing. if Lady comes back to this, which she has no reason to (that's how weak this was).. she'd probably rape you lyrically.