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.Barz Of Steel. 1 16.67%
sabre 5 83.33%
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Old 06-01-05, 11:50 PM   #16
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Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying//just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying! (Eh...6/10)
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes//but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!(Eh...6/10)
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud//only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves(Bud=filler type..but nice line..8/10)
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music//the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it(Iight I Feel Dat 8/10)
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see//think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key(Decent? 7/10)
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist//its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist(Nice Closer 9/10)
----OVERALL SABRE 44/60------------------
I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude//He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" (FYI...dont do explanations and 1st line=self glorifying...5/10..bad opener)
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines//But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"(using line twice? no...Hotline=Played...5/10)
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"//Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"(Played....5/10)
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?//When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars"(no good b/c of explanation..other den decent line..7/10)
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground//This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"(No rhyme..and weak lines...4/10)
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow//And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat" (....6/10)
-----Overall B.O.S 32/60-----------------

B.O.S alot of yoru lines were played...elevate some...and V//Sabre
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