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Old 06-05-05, 12:42 PM   #16
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yea I'm ahave to agree wit engmya on this one sounding fake....I know what is..bout y'al nigga y'all ain't holding shit....an on top of that u don't even play that part right..if u ain't really hard u gott aleast play the part right...jus realness yall...soc had nice lines but all ya gun references sounding like a niggas dat been listening to rap gat lines alot instead of a nigga dats actually held one...aside from the genericness of this track it was alot better than I expected..soc's quality is better his flkow is better an delievry is better...not great in any yet but u def good now....u stumbled on a few words tho...still gotta shorten lines a lil so u cna fully pronounce words....pop...dam son ya voice is mad yound sounding....u sound like 13 or 14 dats botu what u is anyways...that what made ya spit so much more fake sounding....u don't sound gully at you...ya lacked emotion like everyoen else said..ya flow was decent u was stumbling on words too....an vocals was a tad low....lyrics I didn't find impression u sounded like the new breed of young niggas spitting they blast alot of dipset & cass..not an original approach but u youn gu got time to develop...I liked beat an the sample on beat was tight..overal not a bad track 6/10....stay up y'all hope this helped..no hate jus realness.......1



I agree 100 percent on everythign he said... Ya'll elevated alot.. flows sound better, presence sounds better.. lyrics were on some fake shit, but aside form that shit was pretty decent.. lol at pop lotty sounding like a lil youngin :-P.. i remember when i used to sound liek that about 2 years ago ......... bow down to this 17 year old muahahahahahaahahahahahahah..

ne way.. id say this was a decent track.. 6.5/10.... ya'll commin up pretty quick
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