yo, this is my first open mic.. lemme know what yall think

people need to wake up and realize the situation theyre placed in
but it takes them too long to face it, and addictions overtake them
why is it hard to see that obviously the lottery is smarter than we
theres kids starvin at 3, play the lottery, how hard could it be
we put the fate of our life in the numbers
but isnt it sumthin when the numbers overcome us
we go through our lives and as we feed into addiction
we're still findin it hard to be feedin our children
as a matter of fact this shit isnt even our fault
the government kicks us down and loves to see when we fall
they imprison us and make money off us while we're up in the penn
but then they're there to pick us up, and help us again
government assistance, people consider great for the nation
but they dont realize that the nation is only tryin to rape them
cuz the money they feed into social assistance
is only given back to them, through hopeless addiction
high taxes on cigarettes, theyre addictive and steep pricing wont stop it
tell the truth, all you capatilist bastards care about is a profit
its like a revolving door, the system spins us in circles
but then the door stops suddenly, and the results are so hurtful

theres some shit i did feedback on:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2229171
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2229174

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