Voted For: DoggyDogg69

At Your Lines I'm Laughin-At-Best, Cuz Like Perverts Reading Porno Stories Your Wack'n-At-Text //
Clap-Quick-With-Techs N With Punches I Tackle-This-Vet Cuz He Stays Hittin Up Hex Like "Graphic-Requests" //
^^just thrownin words that rhyme together
Got-Drowned,-Knocked! With All Them Losses You Must Be Mad As Hell...Ha...Shot-Rounds-Off //
You Can't Stop-Ground-Ops Ya Whore'd-N-Cleavered,-Got-Clowned-Hot! Cuz I Put You Underneath Me Like The "Forum-Leader-Drop-Down-Box" //
^^same shit
Punches’ll wake You Up and Break Yah Nuts is this guy Fake or what does it take the whole fuckin site to Say U Suck //
Or a member of yah own fam who Hates Yah Guts //
^^stupuid...wak ass fuq
Yah Text Is Just Weak so I simply Shred Him And Flea you? Ahead Of Me //
Please there’s no way this faggots Better Than Me I mean shit! Even yah audio will only receives Negative Feed //
^^wak
Pass Him Through Flames the truth is yah Whack and Yah Lame //
the fact that you whine cuz everyone Laughs Is A Shame but I understood as soon I saw how much this Faggot Complains //
^^wak

Problem with your verse was that you had no punchlines.Most of your lines was bassically throwin a bunch a words that rhyme together.Read tha tutorials cause apperantly you didn;t based on ur verse.

My lyrics remind you of your avy, son, i'll shank your head
This kids flow is only 'Mod'erate like he's the one makin threads
^^Nice
Im walkin all over you faggot, so I guess its safe to call you a tube sock
Leave this faggot Black and 'Blue' from head to toe like he was 'Snoop Dogg'
^^didn;t rhyme and didn't hit as a punch
You aint nothing new to me, just another herb to merk
Battles are made for punchlines, your little jabs won't hurt
^^played out concept
This kids lines aren't hittin like blindfolded shooters
DoggyDogg's 'fuckin' nothing to me, like he just been 'neutered'
^^Nice
I got this dog on a leash, so you already know that he's owned
DoggyDogg is getting rocked in this battle, like I just hit him with a stone
^^OK

Well...you claim the verse was keyed.Which explains why this shit was lackin.Only 1st. and 2nd to last ones were good.The others in between suked.But ya still killed the other guy...so ya got another win against a noob.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196078


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