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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-09-05, 06:59 PM
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The Rise
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IP:
this was a ok drop from you.....vocab was put and used nicely didnt say words that are used in daily life....flow was goin well kept me readin on rythem.....structure was good...opener was a good intro and closer was not that good....in my oponion i think this was to long but it was overall pretty good...
overall-7/10 |
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