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Old 07-19-05, 12:33 PM   #1
~Lady Fiya~
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Post ~Floating Words~

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“…Lean not towards your own understanding.”
-Proverbs 3:5

Intro
It’s not coincidental that sight and sound tend to match in basic symmetry
The same sounds that make our ears tingle can open our eyes wide vividly
The senses help guide in the straight path splitting those that are abnormal
We feel things from the tips of our fingers and hear sounds of paranormal

Floating Words
You won’t meet her directly ’cause you won’t look for her like phone calls
from friends out far, nor green lights for cars.. not even speech for the jaws
they say she don’t exist, it’s a belief you seen it because of those with faith
not the things you see and hear everyday from ringing bells, babies or trains..
but the disabled r able to wait and depend on her, to follow the hands to obey
only at the end will you read this the right way, mute words she will convey
she communicates disregarding class and culture, thoughts boiling into tests
like the lips of Judas revealed Christ, weak judgment blossoms the blessed
& to know someone so sensational can be aware with ears overtly immature
she’s lured by lifelines in palms of this sincere companion, it’s quite secure...
...submitting her pure comprehension of verbs, subjects, n subordinate clauses
common people only imitate, replace the translation using periods for pauses
but we fall into complex traps, willing to convert back to her we attempting to fly
we pivot back to what’s known, being ignorant we go on and on like clocks time
our hands switch position like gestures, for one to understand we’ll exaggerate it
Every word is in the eye of the beholder, writing insults her…Ms. Sign Language


---The conflict in this topical is how people can Write and produce floating words (concrete)... vs. how people can use symbols to produce symmetrical floating words (abstract).---

I wrote this as a topical battle for today, but I would like regular feed in this forum... Because this is my favorite piece I have written, by far.
Thanx much...
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