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08-01-05, 12:35 AM
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the chorus/bridge - I thought it was strait.. flowed well.. good job
First verse - i thought this was a decent verse.. dunno about the rhyme scheme you were using.. but i thought it was decent also.. Second verse - I liked this verse better.. scheme was better.. flow was more enjoyable.. pretty good shit here... gj Third verse - the flow was different.. i liked it.. thought the vocab was pretty damn thorough in this verse.. good shit there.. overall i thought it was pretty hot.. overall i liked the track.. keep droppin man..
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