hook is cool i guess,

RAW=wack

lol jp the verse was alright the lines were to streched in my eye, the stucture was good flow was off, the vocab could be upped but for a key i think it was pretty good, the imagery was weak well this is a random om nothing spectacular or anything but its still pretty good man, keep it up, i'd like to see you try a om sometime.

rtf links in the sig

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