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Deranged2 5 100.00%
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Old 08-29-05, 12:40 AM   #16
Calypso
£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
 
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Voted For: Deranged

Jeezy

Ima be real witcha dogg, cuz this battle isnt my first time..
ill even piss in ur mouth and u still wouldnt spit a hot line..*
-7/10-decent opener coulda came harder
Like T.I. "im a king" and ur just a pawn, u cant 'check' me 'mate'..
and like fags wearin blue claimin bloods, bro i consider u fake..
-9/10-probly your best line pretty decent
If u got guns then point em away cuz u dont wanna hurt yourself..
Only one u touched was that super soaker u got when u turned twelve..
-6/10-seemed forced rhyme and wasnt that great of a punch
ur verses are like midgets..they wont even stick out if you held down and 'SHIFT IT'..**
I can ask santa to give u raps for christmas and u still wouldnt be 'lyrically gifted'..
-8/10-nice play on words with the 2nd line a decent verse
u probably have like 10 accounts banned..so you decided to hide behind an alias..
cuz u prefer to 'bite' the cock no matter what the 'DAILY' is..***
-7/10-pretty weak closer you coulda came harder

Summary:37/50 Not too bad of a drop you coulda came harder but not to bad

Deranged

this battle's a sure win..I'ma smack him so his aunti'll feel the thump
and wtf..why you in a rush to lose?..when ur' panties in a clump*
-8/10-Decent opener nice usin personals
ur own mother hates you twice..and she's the one who placed u in strife
and while you claim I'm wasting time...
......bitch........YOUR WASTING LIFE!**
-8/10-the first line sucked....2nd one was pretty tight tho
must think you pretty now..but after this u'll be boasting a few cuts
callin me a herb but you the one gettin roasted like peanuts***
-9/10-That one actually made me laugh probly your best verse
u better start hualin ass cuz ur fallin flat..down in the subject
Cuz Jeezy.. I ain't DMX..but I'ma still clown you in public
-6/10-weak
u ain't rising...you epotimizing..full of whackness in the package it seems
tired a herbs?....how?..when your the wearin them in your genes (genes)***
-7/10-Decent close but coulda came harder

Summary:38/50 Better than Jeezy's by a hair only because of the personals you both need to elevate but nice drop
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