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Jeezy |
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0 | 0% |
Deranged2 |
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5 | 100.00% |
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£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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Voted For: Deranged
Jeezy Ima be real witcha dogg, cuz this battle isnt my first time.. ill even piss in ur mouth and u still wouldnt spit a hot line..* -7/10-decent opener coulda came harder Like T.I. "im a king" and ur just a pawn, u cant 'check' me 'mate'.. and like fags wearin blue claimin bloods, bro i consider u fake.. -9/10-probly your best line pretty decent If u got guns then point em away cuz u dont wanna hurt yourself.. Only one u touched was that super soaker u got when u turned twelve.. -6/10-seemed forced rhyme and wasnt that great of a punch ur verses are like midgets..they wont even stick out if you held down and 'SHIFT IT'..** I can ask santa to give u raps for christmas and u still wouldnt be 'lyrically gifted'.. -8/10-nice play on words with the 2nd line a decent verse u probably have like 10 accounts banned..so you decided to hide behind an alias.. cuz u prefer to 'bite' the cock no matter what the 'DAILY' is..*** -7/10-pretty weak closer you coulda came harder Summary:37/50 Not too bad of a drop you coulda came harder but not to bad Deranged this battle's a sure win..I'ma smack him so his aunti'll feel the thump and wtf..why you in a rush to lose?..when ur' panties in a clump* -8/10-Decent opener nice usin personals ur own mother hates you twice..and she's the one who placed u in strife and while you claim I'm wasting time... ......bitch........YOUR WASTING LIFE!** -8/10-the first line sucked....2nd one was pretty tight tho must think you pretty now..but after this u'll be boasting a few cuts callin me a herb but you the one gettin roasted like peanuts*** -9/10-That one actually made me laugh probly your best verse u better start hualin ass cuz ur fallin flat..down in the subject Cuz Jeezy.. I ain't DMX..but I'ma still clown you in public -6/10-weak u ain't rising...you epotimizing..full of whackness in the package it seems tired a herbs?....how?..when your the wearin them in your genes (genes)*** -7/10-Decent close but coulda came harder Summary:38/50 Better than Jeezy's by a hair only because of the personals you both need to elevate but nice drop
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