Voted For: Deranged

u a pussy...a puppy with his tail between his leg,house or in street
this dude's shook at me..in front me..on his knees...beggin for no beef^^
^^heh, ok
retarded MC's startin to bleed from when I stab ur neck n turn it blue
and ur mind's phased..cuz in ur profile....you still reppin 2 crews
^^meh, weak
and to top it off...you a faggot..eatin cocks n tastin..what is this?
tied up with more buea's(bows) than Playstation's at christmas
^^simple but okish
i ain't steppin to you..u already squashed up..n seein it lighter
& ur profile's right in ways...cuz your bio is being a rider (writer)
^^stretched IMO, so kinda weak
u leave the personals in the blue..for me to leave u pissin n puke
this shit's like your own name..cuz you'll end up missin a W
^^nice personal
I luv troublin you cuz if there's a gang for those afraid to bust,u elite
n ur aim's bein real...cuz your spits cuase tons of choas n put us to sleep*
^^not too bad
this site's a fiesta for hot cliques...but ur crew ain't show for the party
n that crew of herbs better start that movement already..& leave RV
^^ok
vanquish outta here...but in the game..u unseen at the bottom height
& ur due(dew) to disappear like a wodden porch on autumn nights
^^kinda badly worded but ok concept

also man, you need to work on making it flow more smoothly, a lot of your lines were too stretched

vs.

this guy gon talk shit like he a NATURAL
i'll have his face re arrenged,call me the animal
^^nah non-witty threat
i'll load my glock...step up front...and blast his head
cuz this gon be the last time this nigga goes 2 bed
^^*yawn* talking about gun threats on the web - sorry man, this straight labels you a newb

everytime they post who has the wackest skillz they put the blame on you.
shit im lyrically gift u just paranoid..............so muthafuck wat ya gon do...
^^1st line ok, 2nd line is wack - don't question...diss!
nigga u deranged.............kk yea man thats true
u think you gon win but tell people stop lyin to you..
^^weak
ill demolish this fool he dissolve so quick...
quicker than ur girl was SUCKIN on my DICK!
^^ wack
this is a KO lyrical knockout the crowd roarin
where is ur god now?!?!?!...just another MC im floorin...
^^nah, wack self glory (self glory only works if it's funny and witty)
ill break this fool i was taght to never aim...
so ima grab this fool beat him to death...bash his brain
^^nah, threats also only work if they're funny and witty, this is just a waste of space
my be a classic ur brain took too much damage its dented
you aint got no fuckin skills ur fuckin herb ur generic ur skillz is rented.
^^well at least you're dissing him here, but nothing original, so it's weak.

no hate, you're just new that's all, battle some easier people to elevate first

deranged wins easily

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel