RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
CarsonJet 1 16.67%
Natural killa 5 83.33%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 09-28-05, 06:21 PM   #16
PreZidict
...Liven Proof...
 
Posts: 364
From: Big Apple
IP:

Voted For: Natural killa

CarsonJet
Now let me start this piece, with a sigh of relief.....yes
I must confess, For a sec...I thought I called out a real vet
^^nothin too hard, no real personal [5-10]
Instead I caught this,"a killa of text", thrown outta context
Boy, you couldn't spit tight' if you were dressed in spandex
^^spandex bar? old as fuck [1-10]
So let's Digress, to the reason that your wins are joke
Your lines wouldn't be dope if you wrote em wit coke
^^that was aight but u tend to use played concepts [5-10]
Yes I know...you get vote's, But Killa take note....
Your broke...There's no one here left to go an Deep Throat
^^that was aight not that hot though [4-10]
Your done, Your finished, Your in my cross-hair's...
You couldn't step up to this verse if I made you these stairs
^^i think that was ya best line [7-10]

ALTOGETHER = 22%

Natural Killa
splittin ya gaurd..i'm spittin so hard..ur soul's quezy..it's a giddy flight
can't say I got no life,mister
.......ur 21 years old on this damn kiddy site....
^^ehh that was a straight line set-up was okay [6-10]
ya shit hits me light..claim ur on a roll?..well ur bout to fall back on those wheels
ur an audio head battlin me..but it don't matter..ur whack on both feilds
^^so so [5-10]
cracking ur sheilds...if u ever won anything..guess wat?..it was all luck
'n reason for no award isn't cuz 'a herbs...reason for no award..
.................is cuz YOU SUCK!!.......
^^ehh kinda good but kinda bad [4-10]
all 'em threads,PM's,& IM's..wow..ur either obsessed or gay for that tattle 'n spin
cos shit...I think this cat's fallen in love...this is MORE than a battle to him -_-
^^ahahaha good humor to liven up ya verse [7-10]
rattle ur shins 'n hookin ya flight..u shook in this fight..u prolly gonna bite some shit
and u ain't got no errands to run..u just checkin in late just to pre-write ur shit
^^prewrite <--frequently used but nice tho [6-10]

ALTOGETHER = 28%



wordplay--> natural killa
punchlines--> natural killa
personals--> neither
multiples--> neither
creativity--> both
structure--> carsonjet
humor--> natural killa
flow--> both

overall: Natural Killa
Send a message via AIM to PreZidict  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:49 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.