This was a cool battle...

Both of ya did have sort of the same things in structure, flow, vocab, etc.. but really, i didnt like ur rhyme scheme much spek.. its like same thing over n over agen.. well guess thats okay.. but like its jst u can easilly tell that its the same rhyme scheme over n over agen.. and also Ysdat had a better storyline, and at the end it was a good twist, well surprise.. but yeah.. i gotta give this to Ysdat man... g'd drop from both..

V/ Ysdat

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