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View Poll Results: Infinite_Stan vs. Ryda
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Old 10-14-05, 08:53 AM   #16
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Voted For: InfiniteStan

ok this was a pretty weak battle... but lets break it down..

Ryda - your verse was ok, the structure was realli off i didnt like it at all, you had some very, very corney lines they were played as hell, some punches you had were good, the vocabulary needs to be worked on becuase it was a bit shallow in that area, need some multis to make your flow better, but not a bad try.. keep elevatin...

IS - your verse was constructed alot better, punches hit harder, your structure was on point, had some nice vocabulary, the verse flowed pretty well throughtout, some of ur shit didnt realli make sence but overall i gave you this because of harder punches, better flow and nice structure good work

overall - IS
 
 


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