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Old 12-10-05, 12:30 PM   #16
B. Magik
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Lmfao...First off, "advocate" and "cartilage" do not come anywhere close to rhyming, and rhyming "retarded" with "cartilage" is a huuuuuuuuuuuge stretch. Doesn't speak too well on your writing skills now does it Beat is cool...But quality is ass...You should probably try spending more than 50 bucks on a set up if you want to sound anywhere close to professional Wtf at your lisp, its annoying the shit out of me..."Because of my lyrics, you won't play my records" WTF is that about? You don't rap about anything special, or controversial, so stop fronting

Overall, I wasn't feeling it. Better luck next time.
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