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Paranoid | 5 | 83.33% | |
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12-13-05, 10:08 PM | #30 | ||
Artist, that simple
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Voted For: Paranoid
This battle wasnt the best I've heard. But it was ok for both of you. Sentence Structure - Yall both lacked in this area. Paranoid fell off a few times, and so did UNF. Yall both need to work on preparing your lines to fit your flow, or it wont sound right at all. Delivery - Paranoid one this. His was more simple but effective, and did not sound like he strained to get his lines out. UNF struggled on riding the beat more than paranoid, which lead to a very inconsistent drop. Punchlines - This goes back to both of your sentence structure. Paranoid got this because he delievered in almost everyline, which made up for a few that didnt hit hard. UNF, your punchlines didnt have any power behind them at all. It seemed that you was searching for something to rhyme instead of going after your opponent. Paranoid gets my vote. His drop was more consistent. Also, both of yall need to work on emotion and quality, cause it was hard to understand some of what yall were saying.
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