okay typing as I listen.......k liking beat so far........ok u changed the delivery a bit.....flow is koo....like the change in the delivery but u lackign presence in this track....the hook wasn't much...what was the layered effect u put on it? cuz it hurt hook......again second still same flow which is koo but it jus isn't entertaining to me....prolly shoulda addlibed or had like a punch in bar...u using that softer tone fast like busta....u shoulda had a few bars that u really empahsize a few times in each verse woulda really gave this song that energy it was lacking....overall this is koo..jus not great..jus a average track...but keep dropping stay up fam


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...756#post2611756

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