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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
02-02-06, 05:32 PM
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OKconcept, story telling, imagery and emotion. Vocab was nice too. I do think if you included a bit more internal rhymes it would have been even better though. Only thing I don't like is how you worded the last part
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