listenin, liking how u put Jayz at the begining, gives a nice intro, beat is nice, like how the drums come in on the pianos, youre flow is hot, real dope, I think you gotta deliver this better, it seems a hyped beat, but youre goin laid back, but it works im feelin u, hook has a good theme to it however A................R.t.i.s.........t....too many spaces, however lyrics are crazy and youre flow is sick...emotion is good, and presence is dope...

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can you rtf

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