shit was straight dude had more potential then what it was but still dope id give it a 7/10 which is madd good your highlights were

my hopes creep a shutter in my heart beat spark heat like lighters in a dark street
my bark squeeks and echo letgo my begal touch my shit again and ill take out your naval don't think im able too smack your face through this table
your hearts un stable another fable from kane and able strangle you with a cable
to get a clearer picture no markings rocks sparking jusus rose and still walking like in the scripture rip your intestines out your souls the on on your feet
thogh mines paved in gold in slaved the nomes enraged by drones

^^^^^^^^Ill

just work on flow your scheme was off at points anyway keep droppin