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02-27-06, 07:43 PM
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this track brings me back to the mid 90's.....
1st verse....dunno if it was the mixin or the dudes mic, but that quality is off from the rest of the song...good dilivery but strays from beat at points...kinda makes it hard to follow along hook...i like the scratching, suites the beat nicely...gives it more of a grimey feel 2nd verse...this guy has a edgy voice i like it on the track...lyrics were nice, but all over the place 3rd verse....haha kinda sounds like tha fat guy from jurassic 5, nice verse, only critisizm is the opening and the close....the opening seemed like it was squeezed in on the beat...and the closing, well lacked a closing...didnt really end the verse, just sounded like you had more to say but ran out of time.... pretty good song, minor details needed to be fixed but nothing major...some pretty damn good stuff for this site...7.5/10
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