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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
03-15-06, 07:40 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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this was ok.... sacrafice and survive can be made to rhyme, if said correctly.....some bars do need a bit of fixing. overall this was pretty good. the rhyme scheme did have it fall off on flow at parts, but it might be the beat your using or how you flow. the content was ehh....pretty average, but it wasn't bad. keep it up
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