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Old 04-14-06, 11:01 AM   #18
So.Rell
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40-plus lines? Please... 24 is more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
......but I see your verse beat me to the chase!
I'm known to knock out wacks, yo... da raps'll damage ya
I ain't known to put out wack rhymes...
............................................. but today I'm Mim's manager!
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat...
..................................... then check mim's next verse for my punches!

vs.

On RM you're a joke. . winning by no shows, while I'm smackin' dudes
You're wack. .
. .and that's so Truman that you'll get a Doctrine named after you
This is a waste of my time. . know you're going to get wrecked quick
Cause the last time you Cena win you had to battle yourself to get it
Fuck excuses. . YOU STILL DID IT. . and you still gonna spit softly
Bringing so many negatives inverse. . it's no wonder you flip off me
You're trash. . and with your wack mixtape don't even plan for spinning
Though SPuL's the man of the hour. .
. .cause he has such a minute chance of winning
Believe it, you ain't on my level. . so I'll either keep beating this guy or *
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. .* I'll drop a footnote that'll put your whole fucking face on the choir

To Me Mim smoked this dood...Spul you had all the material just didn't set it up right. You had a few good lines, but Mim was hella consistent with his drop so I goes to him.

Vote - Mimesis
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