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Old 04-22-06, 01:55 PM   #16
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Kontroverzy, you had some nice lines...some were decent but not really dope...
But I kinda missed the humor here and the real hard punches....I think you could've done better...

Precize, a nice verse...some lines did make me laugh and you dropped more consistent...
But I think a verse should do without hints or footnotes...so next time leave them out of your verse...

Precize had humor in his lines and was more consistent
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