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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
06-04-06, 06:44 PM
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This was good...You should play around with your structure a bit...You should keep writing and you'll get better...You did tell a story and the connection from the first line to the last was excellent...keep it up
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