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Old 06-15-06, 02:23 PM   #21
da sein
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This cats a novice'. thinkin im putin up a lame fight?
He'll have a razr' to his neck like he talkin and drivin at the same time.
Awwww The way you chose ya name is too cute
I guess Ghost suits you due to fact im walkin right through you
Muff is a amazing vet. Try to hate the best?
ill make ya flesh crawl' till the point it tries to take baby steps.
Ghost's wack as fuck yet hes gassed like petroleum
So ill have his guts hanging out' so long..
......................his intestines get arrested for loitering

vs

for Forcing-ya-speaks .......You’ll be a tored whore and you’ll get dumped For shore
........like you was tossed-in-a-beach
so I’ll juss pop-dis-playa when I spit bars-and-clips and
..........you couldnt ‘fill the charts-wit-hits’ if you was ‘recording boxing-data’

Muff...some decent WP ...coo punches...that flersh crawl line and the closer were beastly

ghost....no lie, that verse was an eye sore...i liked some of the concepts but it was s0o hard to root through all the filler to get the punches that it was almost not worth it...coupla decent hits...some wording problems hurt you

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