The cypher was going good, we were getting up and crunk
then you came and posted a verse .....and fucked it all up!
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You never throw heavyweight punches, more like untrained jabs.
untrained rhymes, you not even seen sick to the untrained eye!
Some emcees need help on structure, you have the whole catch.
you have a fucked up structure ......with the lines to match!
Every friend you spit a rhyme to said you wouldn't make it, right?
well, how does it feel now that you're proving them right?
Cause it's true, you're not nice with text, never be great with mics.
you're not sick in any kind of way, you can't even fake it right.
And let me remind you, cause I think you forgot to notice
we said your rhymes look nice in the trash, not posted!
Basics of a Good Emcee, thats what you should start learning about
so come back to the cypher and post ...after you've figured it out!

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The Scholar