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Old 08-04-06, 12:44 PM   #6
Texxus
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Ya becomin a joke, the lower rank battlers is tellin ya ass off
this faggots got die hard Blue Devil fans sayin dukes goin soft

^Duke/Blue Devil shit is starting to get played...but anyways i wasnt feeling your verse at all didnt have me flowing, that bar was the only decent one.

vs

I'm not sure about my verse. Lemme think for minute, dude...
Coz I don't know whether it'll beat u senselss...
... or beat some sense into u
U're just a dull writer...I can see u're so basic...
'Coz I'm spittin' hot fire, and NOBODY'S leaning towards Avent
In my check-in, I had to say somethin' careful and safe...
I would'a said that I smelled pussy, but that would'a scared u away
Everybody get's laid now, even 12-year-old kids screw...
And I wondered how sex hotlines stayed in business...until I met u

I was feeling this but the rest of ya verse wasnt hitting. but this battle i got Shake winning this good shit from each other no hate just stating a opinion. `pz
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