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Old 08-10-06, 03:08 AM   #14
Brock Sampson
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Untold...

when i look @ ya sig, i think..

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!


Check this out homeboy...not a bad verse here. Some things I need to clear up tho. Couple of ur setups were "not right" and didn't do the punch justice. like u were just sayin words to make em connect. You spelled GENIUS wrong so that dosen't make you one. And this is dope but gay at the same time

kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!

cuz you DON'T won't to shove ANYTHING up a guys ass.

Flow...

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids

Not as bad as ppl are sayin but I think you shoulda matched his lines. I may have givin you the "V". But I think his punches came harder after comparing em IMO. Ur opener and Closer were cool as a punch. The ones inbetween were cool too...just not HAAAAAAAAARD enuff!! Gotta be Concrete!!!

V/ Untold
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