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Old 08-10-06, 10:29 AM   #16
Binary I
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Flow Intell ruined untold in like, the first two bars. first off, he had punches that made sense, not a lot of monotonous accenting of his multies, rhymes that weren't unmatched, and a clean, consistent flow.

i see about one of those things in Untold's verse, his punches hit a little bit. the problem was all the multies clogging the space where you could have made a shot at him. this verse was ehh, i expect better from both of you.

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