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Old 08-13-06, 07:34 PM   #17
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Hate how I judge, untill you saw what your honour wrote
You have a Soul of a Fighter... stomping on your throat
^naw, son.. shit just wasn't funny
D explain things?See, I have a habit of puttin' dudes in place
& if you want to know what's behind my name....it'll be euthanize
^un.. no! this didn't even rhyme.. lame.

vs.

that whack punchline? now i'm serioulsy not playing any games
cuz it looks like tha Alphabets had an accident, & fell over into your name.
^lolz. this wasn't really a punch, but it was funny.. aiight.
it's a shame, don't start none. there won't be no trouble
D tha 1st rapper to get his name from
some1 who couldn't spell 'n a crossword puzzle.
^aiight. i see what ur goin for, but not too harsh.

chea, pretty one sided here, if ya ask me. euth held his own in this battle. may have not been with strong punches, but they were enough to take the win again DNRGX. that guy though, sorry yo. u got some shotty punches and bad wordin, yo. work on both of those and u could get some where. i feel the 1-2 is a pretty good place to elevate. so look over better punches so u can get a better idea of a good punch.

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